1. The Blizzard - A retelling of the classic tale of Noah's Ark.
2. Notscha vs. Sun Wu Kung - A story detailing the epic fight between Prince Notscha and Sun Wu Kung, the immortal monkey king.
3. Left Behind - An extension to the Apache creation stories with a wicked twist.
4. Mouse Escapes - A continuation to the Brothers Grimm stories with a taste of revenge.
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Week 15 Review: Staying Creative
My favorite item from some of the recent announcements is this picture showing 29 different ways to remain creative. 29 ways to stay cre...
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Noah looked at the almost-finished cabin shelter that God had instructed him to create before the blizzard came. God gave Noah explicit inst... -
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I chose to read your story of The Blizzard. I like that you wrote about Noah's Ark and switched up the method of how God was going to end life. Though it practically stayed true to how the original story was, I hoped for more of a dramatic outcome or even during everything. Keeping all the animals that are necessary, you mentioned plants that would freeze over, maybe he could've taken some useful plants inside the cabin to grow a garden? A garden with edible herbs and such, especially for the animals and him and his family. An attempt to grow at least, since there needs to be sunlight and water. Rather than waiting out a blizzard, there are ways to leave the place with winter gear for skiing or snowboarding in order for them to leave rather than being stuck inside. Can add for drama if you add more details in rather than keeping to the original. The narrative was a great take in the mind of Noah, though dialogue could help for more action and thrill. Overall, you still did a great job in its simplicity!
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